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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on Jul 18, 2010 12:46:47 GMT -5
company administrative examiner previews confidential procedures she can't except foreseeable disadvantages constant renewing, transformation is a revised category specialist explodes signature to stiff script ...then swears
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Post by inflames on Aug 3, 2010 19:04:28 GMT -5
This is neat. I enjoy how swift the pace of the poem is. Nicely done.
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Post by rayofsun on Aug 6, 2010 10:50:56 GMT -5
a very clever view on bureaucracy. nicely done.
rae
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Post by darksider on Aug 9, 2010 14:16:21 GMT -5
LOL Very creative. I love how sofistocated it sounds, stiff almost. Nice Drop!
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Post by Mack Knife on Aug 22, 2010 14:51:56 GMT -5
great wordplay and imagery- very good
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Post by thehippyboy on Aug 24, 2010 18:44:53 GMT -5
I enjoyed what you did with so little options. Very professional, I liked it.
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