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Post by thehippyboy on Aug 13, 2010 20:19:17 GMT -5
My daughter examines 'friendly' aliens; my disadvantage is in the envelope. Planetary aliens swear to steer vessels Over the center to explode.
"He, darling, speaks to renew horror. My disadvantage is in the envelope. The aliens speak heresy. Hypothetically, my disadvantage is in the 'confidential' envelope."
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Post by bcoyotey on Aug 19, 2010 23:03:26 GMT -5
HeHe. Great bit of confidentiality hippie boy. Haven't read a drops from you in ages, so I especially enjoyed finding this one. Touche' my friend. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 31, 2010 22:47:04 GMT -5
A great piece, intriguing and well paced. Loved the idea and you did a great job
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Post by tanithmora on Sept 12, 2010 17:31:46 GMT -5
It feels like a retro doom and gloom! What can possibly be so important in that envelope, that your "disadvantage" is in there?
I like that you actually made a story of this; when I wrote my first one today, I made a distressing and convoluted mess.
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Post by Gurl23 on Sept 28, 2010 11:22:46 GMT -5
Thought provoking and I love the title - very intriguing!
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Post by Chels on Oct 30, 2010 21:43:03 GMT -5
haha I love this! Quite a new and refreshing idea. The 'confidential envelope'.......I wonder what's inside it? ? Thank you for this Hippyboy.
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Post by pureandnatural on Jun 23, 2011 19:37:35 GMT -5
well i have no idea what this means but im laughing anyway thanks for an interesting read peace
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