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Post by ashotinthedark on Oct 23, 2010 1:31:14 GMT -5
An endless love is gone, Stiff tears imminent, He crawls into a grave, To suffer beside her, A reactionary ritual.
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Post by Egnar T. Seinnhoj on Oct 23, 2010 5:05:23 GMT -5
So few words but such a dark tone comes out. That last line is great
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Post by Scarltt32 on Oct 25, 2010 22:24:45 GMT -5
Nicely done, enjoyed this alot! I found out myself how difficult it can be to put together something so strong and meaningful with random words- you've done this flawlessly and made it look easy. I really enjoyed the tone and content!
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Post by ashotinthedark on Oct 25, 2010 23:18:26 GMT -5
Nicely done, enjoyed this alot! I found out myself how difficult it can be to put together something so strong and meaningful with random words- you've done this flawlessly and made it look easy. I really enjoyed the tone and content! Thank you so much. It really is quite a challenge to try to write something that flows with the words given. I kept finding that as soon as I got something going, I would get stuck.
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Post by Lady Wildalice on Oct 30, 2010 21:20:59 GMT -5
ASITD......Very nicely achieved. You make it look so easy............I just can't seem to get it, LOL I try, but end up adding words and.......oops...........see! Very well done indeed. I really enjoyed this piece, short but succinct and meaningful. Thanks
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Post by ronrogers on Nov 20, 2010 11:16:59 GMT -5
An endless love is gone, Stiff tears imminent, He crawls into a grave, To suffer beside her, A reactionary ritual.
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