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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Oct 26, 2010 13:43:55 GMT -5
Care Free
Children at play on a beautiful day delighting to see their wondrous way. Untainted souls, creative young minds spirits not broken yet by the unkind.
Watch them slide and merry go round swinging and tottering, up and down. Make believe times, scampering about no care in the world or seeming to doubt.
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Post by ashotinthedark on Oct 26, 2010 14:11:44 GMT -5
First of all, the fact that you were able to rhyme well with the limited words provided is quite impressive. Aside from that, this is well written and I can't help but smile when I read it. Well done :]
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Post by weavergirl on Oct 29, 2010 13:07:51 GMT -5
none of my children are young enough to take to the park any more, so I love being taken back to those days. thanks much. =-)
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Post by Lady Wildalice on Oct 30, 2010 21:14:27 GMT -5
Wow Musie...........well done indeed. I have the hardest time with pieces I have to concoct from specific lists of words. You did fabulous. Thanks............great write here.
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Oct 31, 2010 9:25:52 GMT -5
ashotinthedark~Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment..it's greatly appreciated...musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Oct 31, 2010 9:26:39 GMT -5
weavergirl~There's nothing wrong with that...glad you enjoyed....musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Oct 31, 2010 9:27:27 GMT -5
wildalice~Thank you so much for the most welcome compliment...so glad you enjoyed this one...musie
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Post by Scarltt32 on Nov 6, 2010 9:20:57 GMT -5
Musie, IMPRESSIVE indeed..wow, awesome little ditty with limited words, perfectly presented! VERY nice!!
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Nov 8, 2010 16:36:37 GMT -5
Scarltt~I thank you my friend...glad you enjoyed....
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 25, 2011 20:06:34 GMT -5
Great poem,I really enjoyed it
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