N.J.C
Established Muse
Posts: 159
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Post by N.J.C on Nov 26, 2010 3:58:05 GMT -5
demons remain deep within my veins,
yet so this pain i deeply believe has brought forth a gift,
by making actions of my words like now as you read I'm making your mind curve,
is it just me or is my mind less then ahead of my time?,
I'm i really just blind should i just go forward and press rewind?
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Dec 12, 2010 6:30:25 GMT -5
I love the last stanza, sometimes I wish I had a fast forward/rewind/pause button for life. Beautiful.
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N.J.C
Established Muse
Posts: 159
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Post by N.J.C on Dec 13, 2010 0:11:06 GMT -5
jaja thank you i didn't think any one would catch that
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Post by inflames on Feb 14, 2011 1:56:44 GMT -5
I adore this. Great piece you've made with the words constraints. =)
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