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Post by knotapoet on Dec 11, 2010 21:55:09 GMT -5
an October wedding planned in the mountains throughout the woods a crisp autumn breeze flowers in the chapel a ritual ceremony why the endless theater behind the myth questioning love the fear inside won't leave she loves me my counterpart, a puzzled face tears develop she kisses me getting married to succeed triumph over boundaries
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Post by bcoyotey on Dec 12, 2010 1:02:42 GMT -5
This is good stuff knot. You set the scene and the emotion quite well. Wonderful read. Welcome to TPS! Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Dec 12, 2010 6:37:34 GMT -5
I second that welcome, you capture the nerves and the exictment of getting married well in this. Really enjoyed reading it.
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Post by knotapoet on Dec 13, 2010 9:17:31 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments and the welcome.That was fun and can't wait for a new list of words.I am new to poetry and writing.This is a place that looks like I can learn a few things.
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