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Post by Shiloh on Mar 25, 2011 1:03:51 GMT -5
Silent ribbons sail, writing color entrance Summer slices green sprout in to fruit flower Cricket chirp audio builds basis under cloud fregrance The rabbit dodge dash across grass Beneath baby birds dramatic helicopter attacks Fairy unsafe endeavor
~Farmer
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Post by inflames on Mar 30, 2011 16:35:58 GMT -5
Hi Shiloh, This is a great drop! Love the end. =) Great effort here. You strung the words together nicely.
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 31, 2011 11:21:38 GMT -5
Shiloh, The imagery and flow are superb. I could smell the flowers and hear the birds. Wonderful sensory input. Kudos! Lady B
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 9, 2011 16:27:28 GMT -5
Beautifully composed drop. I've enjoyed how you put everything together. Great work.
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