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Post by underwhelming on Aug 8, 2011 7:44:09 GMT -5
Newfoundland air splashed flounder weather Evaporated sea water formed sardines swimming in jelly Large black bog pool returned bright shining eggs Why is it wildy tousled hair smelled fresh?
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Post by cafeboy on Aug 11, 2011 0:08:42 GMT -5
Very whimsical imagery here. It was quite playful and I liked it. I love that last tine too.
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Post by underwhelming on Aug 11, 2011 10:30:26 GMT -5
Thanks! First one of these I've ever done. There wer some fun words to play around with. Having spent a few days in beautiful NF, all the ocean imagery immediately took me there.
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Post by - Moirae - on Aug 11, 2011 20:14:45 GMT -5
Very interestingly crafted work here, I like how the imagery transported me seaside with the ocean mist against my face. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing this Drop.
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Post by BhindBluEyes♥ on Sept 3, 2011 18:03:05 GMT -5
Interesting. I especially love the last line (: I've never attempted a D.O.P myself, but you make it look easy, although I'm quite sure it's not. Nice write, thank you for sharing
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Post by AoR on Sept 22, 2011 3:08:00 GMT -5
I love this. Just absolutely love this. ^-^ I echo Moirae's comment, I too, felt like I was taken to the seaside and could just feel the rather lively imagery written here. I found writing a DOP a bit difficult, but you make it look rather easy lol.
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