blackpetal
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Hello! I hope you enjoy my poetry and please post messages!! Thank you =)
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Post by blackpetal on May 30, 2005 5:30:15 GMT -5
Inside My Mind The Butterflies Will Die
I Desire Death To Enchant Me Enchant The Nothingness That I Have Become Let Me Choke On My Own Beautiful Blood My Screams Will Echo For Eternity
Rip Me Open Find No Heart Pandoras Box Without Hope It Scratches And Tears My Every Bone My Screams Will Echo For Eternity
And I'll Blame You For All That Is Done I'll Rape You Of All Your Blood Your Delcious Temple Will Shatter, My Love Tonight You WIll Burn: It Is Done By Wabbit Mistress Please comment on this poem, it's not really that good just got bored!! And it's not really finished properly as I rushed it:) Thank you everyooooneee!!!
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Post by blackacidprophet on May 30, 2005 19:28:52 GMT -5
Sickness... i loved it. ;D
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blackpetal
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Hello! I hope you enjoy my poetry and please post messages!! Thank you =)
Posts: 9
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Post by blackpetal on May 31, 2005 6:26:21 GMT -5
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Post by waterlily07 on Jun 2, 2005 15:35:50 GMT -5
Wicked...the title is full of deception. Kudos!!!
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