Disenchanted Muse
Established Muse
Been writing since I could breathe, because when I could write I could finally draw breath.
Posts: 109
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Post by Disenchanted Muse on Aug 26, 2004 17:00:01 GMT -5
Haunted Dreams
My tears of passion are made with ashes found in your cold embrace. My scars became your grave.
You were the truth beneath my fears.
I was bored and this was a lot of fun, ;D
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Aug 26, 2004 17:03:53 GMT -5
That sounds really good!! I like it.
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Post by 4got10angl on Aug 26, 2004 17:42:37 GMT -5
cool! i liked that! ;D
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Post by cindy on Aug 26, 2004 22:53:21 GMT -5
Great job I liked it cindy
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Post by ThousandFaces on Sept 7, 2004 18:16:29 GMT -5
I love it! "You were the truth beneath my fears" like "you were the wind beneath my wings" Very, very nice. I like it I like it. Your Humble and Obedient Servant, T.F.
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Post by waterlily07 on Sept 19, 2004 13:57:21 GMT -5
Ohh...I like it especially the last line.
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Disenchanted Muse
Established Muse
Been writing since I could breathe, because when I could write I could finally draw breath.
Posts: 109
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Post by Disenchanted Muse on Sept 27, 2004 22:50:14 GMT -5
Whoa! I though this had fallen into the back of the pack, but i guess not Thank you all so much for the feedback!
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Post by Elf(...drowning in tears...) on Dec 2, 2005 18:37:43 GMT -5
Wow,this is short,but very good.
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