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Post by A Picture of Longing on Aug 26, 2004 20:18:22 GMT -5
breathe in silently the ashes of a soft embrace - the moon found a frigid laugh buried in sunlight (a mute waste.)
inhaled the never - the awful sting.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2004 23:22:09 GMT -5
Very nice APOL, flows really well. I like the fact that you managed to rhyme something... I tried but failed heh. Guess next time I'll have to look harder.
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Aug 27, 2004 2:58:52 GMT -5
A very nice one. I enjoyed it! rate3
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Post by 4got10angl on Aug 29, 2004 19:58:56 GMT -5
this was cool! i liked it! ;D
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Post by mywar on Feb 10, 2007 9:08:30 GMT -5
i enjoyed the flow & ryhme of this piece.
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Post by mathtears on Apr 3, 2007 13:35:05 GMT -5
Great. Loved it ! x
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