roreilly
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Post by roreilly on Aug 27, 2004 19:02:50 GMT -5
I sunlight dead breathe silently passion star blossom sound plead ghosts taste inhaled secret moon to free the search for my quiet moved naked earth.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2004 15:00:24 GMT -5
A little confusing. The title made me think though. Really, how do you define "it"?
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roreilly
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Post by roreilly on Aug 28, 2004 15:45:13 GMT -5
I can't give it away that easily.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2004 17:18:13 GMT -5
Awww, come on *waves brownie under nose*
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roreilly
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Post by roreilly on Aug 28, 2004 21:15:04 GMT -5
What do you think it might be saying?
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Post by Taka on Aug 30, 2004 7:34:12 GMT -5
hmmm, interesting............ i think the random words just give the mystery about what it is..............so it could just be anything i.e a person, sunlight, breathe, passion, emtoion............ also, there is a sentence in the line of words if you read it haltingly, with stresses on certain syllables and stop at others......... cool T
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roreilly
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Post by roreilly on Aug 30, 2004 8:42:04 GMT -5
You're close with your first i.e guess.
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Sept 3, 2004 11:41:58 GMT -5
I'm thinking vampire? Something like that maybe...or a werewolf....
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Post by waterlily07 on Sept 19, 2004 13:55:42 GMT -5
I'm at a lost for any guesses right now...it's so mysterious...the way you describe "it." My first initial idea about "it" was love. Anyhow I like the ambiguity here. Nice job, roreilly. ;D
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roreilly
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Post by roreilly on Sept 19, 2004 20:51:19 GMT -5
Waterlilly07, you're getting closer. That's cool.
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Post by Kasurin on Oct 11, 2004 9:18:43 GMT -5
You know... out of all the other Drops of Poetry poems I've read, this has got to be my favorite so far... I love the unique approach you took. By having no punctuation it seems like the events are happening in a fast-forward sort of time. It's interesting.
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roreilly
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Post by roreilly on Oct 11, 2004 10:56:25 GMT -5
Thank you Kasurin.
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