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Post by DOR's Duckie on Sept 4, 2004 18:52:56 GMT -5
dead in a dream snow in a grave ghosts in myself felt anguish grow naked dreams echo your fears
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Post by ThousandFaces on Sept 5, 2004 16:22:42 GMT -5
Simple, but it speaks volumes. I'm suprised no one else has reviewed this yet!
T.F.
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Post by DOR's Duckie on Sept 5, 2004 17:18:56 GMT -5
well thanks for being the first.
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Post by waterlily07 on Sept 6, 2004 16:58:17 GMT -5
I like it...very powerful write, ThousandFaces.
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Mary
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Post by Mary on Sept 19, 2004 13:01:15 GMT -5
I especially like the last line - very crisp.
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