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Sept 6, 2004 11:37:17 GMT -5
Post by waterlily07 on Sept 6, 2004 11:37:17 GMT -5
A moment of desire blossoms in my soul never dancing in the sunlight.
For now, it recoils in anguish... pleading for dreams to embrace it from its snowy frigid grave.
Seasons echo freely for spring breathes into earth... melting snowy graves.
A moment of desire inhales the joys of sunlight... alas a rose of passion blossoms.
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Sept 8, 2004 18:18:10 GMT -5
Post by ThousandFaces on Sept 8, 2004 18:18:10 GMT -5
Good. Heartfelt, full of passion. Good.
T.F.
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Sept 8, 2004 21:24:33 GMT -5
Post by waterlily07 on Sept 8, 2004 21:24:33 GMT -5
Thank you T.F.
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Sept 13, 2004 19:20:41 GMT -5
Post by Rué (Hero) on Sept 13, 2004 19:20:41 GMT -5
Wow...I admire those who can do drops of poetry...it's too time consuming for me!
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Sept 13, 2004 21:44:32 GMT -5
Post by waterlily07 on Sept 13, 2004 21:44:32 GMT -5
I'm kind of addicted to it right now...hehe. ;D You never know what you'll create...thanks for your comment, Rue (Hero).
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