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Post by Jabberwiccy on Sept 27, 2004 20:32:44 GMT -5
First time trying this, tell me what you think: I dug a grave His bare death a Secret found in frigid sunlight beneath ashes inhaled into My cold heart. I am naked, Silky softness silently haunted
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fatepawn
Wandering Muse
I live in shadows but fear no light. My burden?s heavy, but my heart is light.
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Post by fatepawn on Oct 4, 2004 17:43:12 GMT -5
Hmm...i'm not really a haiku person but i thought you did a pretty good job.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2004 0:03:43 GMT -5
A haiku? Where? Hehe, nice work wiccy.
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Post by Kasurin on Oct 11, 2004 9:01:20 GMT -5
Pretty haunting use of words.I couldn't find the exact haiku order in it, but I definately got the feel of a haiku in the poem.
I love The Jabberwocky btw! It's such a fun piece of rhyme.
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360rider03
Established Muse
I make stories and live life...
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Post by 360rider03 on Mar 20, 2005 20:01:37 GMT -5
i just posted my first two, though i wasnt afraid to sorta bend the rules so id encourage you as well as more ppl to, if its legal, lol
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