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Post by ~LostForWords~ on Oct 3, 2004 16:24:41 GMT -5
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hollow anguish secretly moved a poet in dreams; deadly rhyming passion of frigid tears in moon, snow, and death.
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Post by waterlily07 on Oct 8, 2004 22:51:13 GMT -5
Love the word choice, LFW, especially "hollow anguish" and "deadly rhyming passion." Very powerful words indeed.
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Post by Kasurin on Oct 11, 2004 9:14:04 GMT -5
Sketchy. Me likes. The first line was a very poignant one to me.
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Post by fionnachtain on Oct 16, 2004 20:03:07 GMT -5
The first line was awesome. Then it kind of lapsed into vagueness.
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kelso
Wandering Muse
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Post by kelso on Oct 17, 2004 0:25:01 GMT -5
I am not sure I follow this one, but interesting word choices...I would like to have your description of your meaning here to help me follow this better.
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