Caffienew----
Wandering Muse
His green eyes leak red. And desire disappears
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Post by Caffienew---- on Oct 5, 2004 21:08:10 GMT -5
mmm iunno if this is good...but this is the first time I've ever done this so...yea^^
Haunted tears fall beneath cold scars You can taste the dreams As they welcome your death Look to the moon Pray for release Plead with the ghosts And smile as you die
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Post by waterlily07 on Oct 8, 2004 22:48:20 GMT -5
I liked it...a little eerie and sad all at the same time. Nice job.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2004 1:01:13 GMT -5
Nice work CW
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:38:54 GMT -5
"You can taste the dreams" I love that line. Great job!
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