LittleEar
Established Muse
I live in my imagination...it's a very scary place. For in my imagination, anything goes... :)
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Post by LittleEar on Oct 18, 2004 22:31:07 GMT -5
I tried Drops of Poetry, and this is what I came up with...I've never written anything so morbid before, lol. But really, these things write themselves- so I blame the poem, not me I don't think this makes sense... I never dared to laugh, For in tear's embrace was I, and secret fears found my dreams to breathe haunted silent echos. Crying with no joy; Blossoming with no smiles; Pleading with no soul, for the eyes of death shone shone frigid in his season... But sunshine shone upon the ashes; anguish began to melt away... Where lines of tears freely fell, came spring, came softness, came smiles. Thorns from the roses, Smiles from the sun, Anguish from the ashes, and laughter...from the grave. ~LittleEar
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Caffienew----
Wandering Muse
His green eyes leak red. And desire disappears
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Post by Caffienew---- on Oct 18, 2004 23:15:02 GMT -5
Wow, I really like it! ^^ Isn't Drops of Poetry a wonder? lol I like the description, and it really is beautiful. I like the first and last stanzas the best. Keep up the good work!! whee!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:37:36 GMT -5
Amazing imagery here. Very beautiful!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 24, 2006 22:35:56 GMT -5
EEw Littlear, I like! I like! Lady B
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