Caffienew----
Wandering Muse
His green eyes leak red. And desire disappears
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Post by Caffienew---- on Oct 18, 2004 23:44:12 GMT -5
Hrmm, I'm actualy quite proud of this one. I luv this drops of poetry thing! ^^ Hope you like it
I never dared to cry Within your cold embrace While fears lay buried In your haunting eyes
I danced with your darkness And your starlight moved me Your anguish was echoed By the softness of my cries
Your laughter is deadly And the moon is your enemy The sun becomes too hollow When desire becomes too much
Your grave is already dug I now posess your soul And when I come to join you Is when I'll cry in your cold embrace
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Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2004 1:16:16 GMT -5
You should be proud of this one, one of the best by far. Nice work CW.
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Caffienew----
Wandering Muse
His green eyes leak red. And desire disappears
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Post by Caffienew---- on Oct 19, 2004 16:16:06 GMT -5
Oooo thankies! You don't know how much that means to me!^^
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Post by Jessie on Nov 16, 2004 21:30:29 GMT -5
Yeah, you definitely should be proud of this. This is awesome and amazing, and especially great since you are only allowed to use certain words. And, yeah, I agree, Drops of Poetry is a lot of fun. Anyway..this rocks. I love it.
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Post by cindy on Nov 21, 2004 9:03:07 GMT -5
CW, Beautifully written, Amazing, cindy
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Post by kiltedpoet on Nov 26, 2004 16:41:33 GMT -5
very nice, hope to read more of your work,
More power to your pen.
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CynicEchoes
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Lost & Searching...
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Post by CynicEchoes on Nov 27, 2004 18:21:14 GMT -5
Bada$$! Awesome! ;D
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