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Post by Whitney on Oct 19, 2004 20:07:55 GMT -5
I exhaled death. Cry silently. Found The scars. Tears for him. Smiles given away. Write out my pain.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Oct 25, 2004 20:28:33 GMT -5
Interesting, I like how it seems like a chopped up poem...condenses the meaning.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2004 21:30:43 GMT -5
nice work Whitney, like the last line, most of us tend to do so.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:46:18 GMT -5
Nice job here! I love the flow!
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