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Post by waterlily07 on Oct 31, 2004 11:29:20 GMT -5
recoiled dreams embrace the moon for the moments of passion silently quiet and fears blossom in tears... a naked heart cries with anguish pleading to taste the sting of death in following his ghost
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Nov 6, 2004 17:50:56 GMT -5
Great poem, Waterlily- I really like the ending, perfect choice
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Post by Vampirella666 on Nov 10, 2004 12:12:57 GMT -5
pleading to taste the sting of death that line is beautiful
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Post by waterlily07 on Nov 11, 2004 17:50:28 GMT -5
Thanks Amaranthine and Vampirella666...I appreciated your comments.
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