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Post by 4got10angl on Nov 9, 2004 18:53:29 GMT -5
Buried fears blossom; Echoed anguish laughs.
Death comes to plead; My soul silently dies.
Truth haunts hollow dreams; Scars sting, tears fall.
I being to waste away; Alas an end! I fall to my grave.
Death smiles; it posseses me...
(a/n...eh not great! but HEY! it's a start!! first thing i've actually written...er...typed...in QUITE a while!! ;D hope you like!)
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Post by Vampirella666 on Nov 10, 2004 12:07:01 GMT -5
Wow, love it:D..I think it's really good...
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2004 21:34:57 GMT -5
Nice one LA, like the last line.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:45:54 GMT -5
Interesting.... Great write here!
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