Athenry
Wandering Muse
It's so lonely 'round the fields of Athenry...
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Post by Athenry on Nov 10, 2004 23:37:10 GMT -5
I can silently cry To echo the anguish Will waste with dreams Hollow for a moment, I saw the passion Where a star of Truth Came over my soul
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Post by waterlily07 on Nov 11, 2004 17:53:50 GMT -5
Loved those lines...it added an inspirational aspect to your poem.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2004 21:36:08 GMT -5
Really like that part. Nice work.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:45:05 GMT -5
I agree with all the above. That last line was amazing!
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robbon
Wandering Muse
experience is pain and growth
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Post by robbon on Jul 24, 2006 20:19:13 GMT -5
i liked the whole thing from the tears to the hollowness to the passion of the star of Truth. Greay piece of work!!!!
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Oct 17, 2006 7:34:55 GMT -5
Sensational. This is absolutely sensational! Kudos.
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