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Post by TheGone on Nov 25, 2004 18:24:51 GMT -5
I moved dreams, Buried Diamond, I am the echo, Battle for truth But I plead, For my anguish, That is my Door, Into, Poetry.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 12, 2004 18:04:21 GMT -5
Nice little poem, TheGone. I liked it.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:42:02 GMT -5
And a good door it is. Fantastic poem really enjoyed it!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 24, 2006 22:34:36 GMT -5
Thedoor, This is great. Loved it. Lady B
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Post by waterlily07 on Nov 17, 2006 17:02:09 GMT -5
Loved the descriptions in this piece, TheGone. I enjoyed reading this.
~waterlily07~
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Post by matw63 on Sept 22, 2008 14:13:34 GMT -5
this is very nicely done. i think we can all relate to this.
thankyou for sharing
mat
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Post by Created2Write on Oct 2, 2008 18:04:30 GMT -5
"I moved dreams, Buried Diamond, I am the echo,"
awesome use of words, and a great write. I love this verse. Peace, C2W
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