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Post by Llybian on Nov 27, 2004 1:50:17 GMT -5
I recoiled at a daffodil Lingering for the sunlight to silently exhale Silky snow spilling furiously Consuming the streets in soft vanilla tears It's death an anguished poetry
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 12, 2004 18:11:47 GMT -5
Nice write. I like the word choice, creates in interesting image
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Post by Llybian on Dec 12, 2004 22:26:24 GMT -5
^-^ Thank you very much!!
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Daisie
Wandering Muse
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Post by Daisie on Dec 15, 2004 21:48:40 GMT -5
I love daffodils and so I love this poem
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Post by Llybian on Jan 22, 2005 15:46:32 GMT -5
^^ Thank ya! I love doffodils too.
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Post by firefly501 on May 2, 2005 19:16:43 GMT -5
Excellent write. I especially liked the lines-- "Silky snow spilling furiously Consuming the streets in soft vanilla tears"
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Post by Llybian on Jun 13, 2005 9:11:49 GMT -5
^^ Thanks!
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auragem
Wandering Muse
* Poetry is the crucible where the lemon of thoughts and the jasmine of the soul melt.
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Post by auragem on Mar 27, 2008 1:42:19 GMT -5
"Anguished poetry" is such a melancholic but utterly beautiful idea.
Loved the wanderings of this post!
Gemma
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