acoustic_guru
Wandering Muse
Hi-- life is so cynical, in all its beauty, articulation is the best form of overexertion.
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Post by acoustic_guru on Dec 11, 2004 13:47:35 GMT -5
i inhaled each slit of secret sunlight it shone, spilling silently I consumed myself in lace tears a soul girl, burried in battle with her endless diamond dreams Furrious,frigid fears foamed and fell from hot quiet smiles simmering away an embrace and wasting delicious, naked sounds enchanted art exhaled.
~what do u think?
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 12, 2004 18:18:13 GMT -5
I like it, it's interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2005 16:01:17 GMT -5
Absolutely love the way you pieced that line together. Nice work.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:41:06 GMT -5
Beautiful imagery. Very smooth!
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Oct 17, 2006 7:33:49 GMT -5
I enjoyed this piece. Great alliteration on the fifth line.
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