acoustic_guru
Wandering Muse
Hi-- life is so cynical, in all its beauty, articulation is the best form of overexertion.
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Post by acoustic_guru on Dec 19, 2004 17:35:19 GMT -5
The world blossomed into a silky moment and we came, each from the ashes in the streets, to linger in the charm of freedom for a while. We dared to rid our eyes of ghosts and end the anguish of passion. To be in truth is to plead for death.
~ comments? questions? answers?
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 22, 2004 17:18:44 GMT -5
I like the last line, great write Acoustic.
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newewe
Established Muse
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Post by newewe on Dec 28, 2004 16:15:58 GMT -5
How simply stated in language so warm........nice write...........doug
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dayna
Established Muse
I might spend some time downstairs. ~The Incredible String Band~
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Post by dayna on Jan 5, 2005 12:55:45 GMT -5
I disagree, I do not think this poem is warm, I think it is intensly cold, and that is why I like it. Who was it who said that the worst criticism an artist can receive is to be told that their piece is nice? Im sure it was meant warmly , but I'll use the term thought provoking.
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Post by waterlily07 on Jan 9, 2005 13:45:28 GMT -5
Haunting lines and thought-provoking too.
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Jan 18, 2005 12:08:43 GMT -5
"A bit of knowledge" Are you kidding? This Is Genius.
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