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Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 1, 2005 13:22:12 GMT -5
Death of an Orchid
Free to linger Embrace the scars White is the dove, with a lady's charm Breathe in the earth Simmer the cauldron So that my soul can taste The death of an orchid Please quiet your dreams
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Post by Nightmare *far from home* on Feb 1, 2005 17:43:33 GMT -5
interesting I like it!
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 2, 2005 13:34:25 GMT -5
Thanks buddy! Did you get my message?
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Post by Nightmare *far from home* on Feb 2, 2005 20:10:50 GMT -5
wich message
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 3, 2005 13:26:18 GMT -5
I sent it a couple of days ago...I said that i'm the one who Carly made you growl for, and I was proud of myself that I knew who you were. I'm easily amused, if you can't tell.
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Post by Nightmare *far from home* on Feb 19, 2005 16:51:59 GMT -5
thats ok when hyper I am so easily amused it isn't funny
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Post by pure|sadness on Jul 17, 2005 21:33:56 GMT -5
Hey, breathenomore! Such a tame, quiet & light thoughts! I loved this!
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Jul 20, 2005 8:03:56 GMT -5
Thanks! It's sad how few replies you normally get on these things... I appreciate your say.
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Post by Elf(...drowning in tears...) on Jul 22, 2005 4:16:13 GMT -5
I love the descriptions you used,it's truly a beautifull piece
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Jul 22, 2005 9:13:02 GMT -5
Thank you! I'm glad this one has finally been seen.
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Post by jd on Aug 4, 2005 9:50:29 GMT -5
Great job on the rhyming scheme of things. Had a nice sound to it read aloud.
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Aug 5, 2005 8:50:20 GMT -5
Thanks! Believe it or not, I didn't mean to make it rhyme...
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