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Post by Immaculate on Feb 27, 2005 7:50:57 GMT -5
I slept... Praying for tomorrow Hoping daylight may shine Upon my ghastly soul...
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:51:43 GMT -5
Cool poem, I liked it. I was a bit confused though- the title is "insomnia" and in the first line you say "I slept"- that kind of contradicts itself...oh well, it's still a nice poem
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Post by Immaculate on Mar 9, 2005 19:35:37 GMT -5
Thanks for that, I've seen that you've read my submitted poetries. Yeah it kinda contradicts the title right, i was thinking of me trying hard to sleep, that I seem sleeping but all my senses are awake and kicking.
I'll try making more poems. Thanks a lot again
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Mar 28, 2005 23:01:46 GMT -5
We all hope daylight will touch our souls sometimes...eventually it shall. Nice poem, at first I too was confused about the title, but I read your explanation and feel better.
-- Jus
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