NPS
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Post by NPS on Mar 17, 2005 15:52:47 GMT -5
linger white orchid muggy simmered in a summer's moon then found vanilla dead life so fast ended so soon
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Mar 30, 2005 0:13:25 GMT -5
I like the last line. Nice work, NPS.
~ Jus
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:27:39 GMT -5
Great last line and great imagery. Nice write!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 24, 2006 22:27:57 GMT -5
NPS, great imagery. Very smooth piece. Bravo. Lady B
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andiknewit
Wandering Muse
"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars" - Oscar Wilde
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Post by andiknewit on Nov 4, 2006 5:45:18 GMT -5
I love the image of 'vanilla dead' - it's exactly what happens when a sweet-smelling plant dies. Brilliant poem!
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