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Mar 27, 2005 16:20:52 GMT -5
Post by RoseOfTears on Mar 27, 2005 16:20:52 GMT -5
i fell bare and naked anguish is exhaled, inhaled scars linger in buried tears the moment of secret pain dont you love its randomness?
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Mar 29, 2005 12:50:35 GMT -5
Post by dreamer.of.hope on Mar 29, 2005 12:50:35 GMT -5
very random, lol. Nice write though
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Apr 1, 2005 1:46:41 GMT -5
Not bad, random but still to a point, teen angst in its essence. Nice work. -- Jus
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Post by dlebrtstrngr on Apr 2, 2005 1:17:30 GMT -5
Hey R.o. T.
I just read your poem. The only thing that comes to mind is, Emotional rape of the pysche overlaid with colors of violence. The randomness is contrived...
Looking forward to other of your works.
Until...
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