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Post by dreamer.of.hope on Mar 27, 2005 18:05:38 GMT -5
Each deadly Rids away dreams Stings freedom Smiles silently and scratches, the angels heart
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Mar 31, 2005 3:55:04 GMT -5
Scratching at the center of something so pure takes some strong stuff. Nice write Dreamer,
-- Jus
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Apr 19, 2005 22:12:21 GMT -5
Nice. I noticed a few errors-- I think it sould be Dreams And it's "angel 's -- it's possessive, the angel's heart I liked it though
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Post by waterlily07 on Jun 2, 2005 15:38:35 GMT -5
I liked this piece. Simple yet the imagery explains it all. Nice work, dreamer.
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Post by jd on Aug 4, 2005 7:42:08 GMT -5
Agree with waterlili this is one excellent poem, I like this one immensely dreamer.
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Post by floreza on Sept 24, 2005 20:29:33 GMT -5
Nice poem, and by the way Nice. I noticed a few errors-- I think it sould be Dreams And it's "angel 's -- it's possessive, the angel's heart I liked it though I think it sould be should. ;D
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