Whisper
Wandering Muse
Love's the funeral of hearts
Posts: 24
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Post by Whisper on Jun 25, 2005 0:21:18 GMT -5
silently an echo danced. anguish dulls, glory smiles my ashes linger, gray but hollow. fears tell with truth: plead liberty. Frigid, haunted, sad I follow the faces in battle Alas, at the moment, I felt free.
first breathe, not choke. Scars exist where dreams Embrace the ghosts. Nothing is quiet for Death dared to cry.
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Post by Nightmare *far from home* on Jun 25, 2005 13:50:51 GMT -5
nice write whisper
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Post by bludragonfly on Jun 30, 2005 21:08:34 GMT -5
Nice work, I love the imagery!
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 6, 2005 1:03:31 GMT -5
Whisper, powerful ending. Good work!
-- Jus
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