arty
Wandering Muse
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Post by arty on Jul 21, 2006 12:08:55 GMT -5
i can smile i can laugh i can dance like a flag so joy and free so sounds to be
make you shine make you fly feel so free that's me.. "Oh girl.. i'm right here" everyone sounds so near..!
i may exhale sadness i may even finally cry anyone met my tears ever? No.. never everyone sounded so near now far away from here
medicine in pains is so dear but no one like it for life time near that's me.. that is.. me..
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 22, 2006 7:34:17 GMT -5
Excellently written, I love this! Its odd; its almost like the mood changes between the beginning and the end. Thanks for sharing!
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arty
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Post by arty on Jul 23, 2006 8:46:27 GMT -5
thanks a lot Whisper.. i'm so glad that u love it ^_^ thanks for replying..
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Post by lifeart on Jul 23, 2006 13:43:28 GMT -5
I agree with whisper it is a little bit odd, but I still love it also! Good job!
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arty
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Post by arty on Jul 23, 2006 18:02:50 GMT -5
thanks a lot lifeart.. always happy to see ur replys.. ^_^
umm actually i don't know why it seems odd? the first half says: as long as i'm laughing and bringing happiness to people they seems so near and around.. the second half says: when i let my self to show her sadness all people i thought they r so near suddenly disappeared.. finally the conclusion: i'm like medicine people like it when they need it coz it makes them feel better..but no one like to take medication for life time..
hope that makes it clearer..
best regards..
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Post by lifeart on Jul 24, 2006 11:15:06 GMT -5
actually that does make it a bit clearer thanks!
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