ShadowLark
Established Muse
You only live twice, Once for your life and Once for your dreams.
Posts: 151
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Post by ShadowLark on Nov 13, 2005 11:51:21 GMT -5
I silently recoiled fully free of fears tears linger anguished to plead for death
I bare white angel scars Ghost smiles given eyes alas slit my desire a poets death my grave
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Nov 16, 2005 17:25:47 GMT -5
Spookily good.
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:48:06 GMT -5
i simply loved this work...excellently done
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 21, 2006 2:23:19 GMT -5
ShadowLark, I think I actually liked the first stanza more than the second - the imagery was very strong throughout, though, and your emotions were expressed well.
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Post by lifeart on Jul 22, 2006 16:16:07 GMT -5
hmm simply beautiful. I love both stanzas equally!
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