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Post by split44 on Dec 13, 2005 23:30:04 GMT -5
Embrace faces of glory tears smiles linger free my fears. Severe sunlight consume furious desire. Secret dreams exist in rhyme. I fell in your charm
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Post by waterlily07 on Dec 20, 2005 19:10:38 GMT -5
Loved the overall feeling this piece has...especially in the last line. Writing is too addicting to give up.
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Post by Ponderer on Dec 26, 2005 2:03:17 GMT -5
Shows the intensity of a poet!
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:42:50 GMT -5
wonderful work...made me feel courageous reading it..
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