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Post by cristella1 on Apr 25, 2006 11:19:35 GMT -5
LIBERTY IN MY POETRY LINES RHYMING FOR HIS GLORY NAILS LAID IN YOU NOW I SEE TRUTH NO JOY WHEN APART WORLD EMBRACE THE HEART YOUR SOUL PLEASE SEARCH DEATH TO MYSELF AND FREEDOM TO THE EARTH
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Post by ravenfreebyrd on Apr 25, 2006 14:10:52 GMT -5
Beautiful work cristella and welcome to TPS Love, Raven
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Post by Weep Not For Mortimer on Apr 30, 2006 14:21:42 GMT -5
Interesting use of capitals. Not sure I like that. But the sentiment is quite admirable, even to an unsympathetic atheist like me. Remarkable faith and commitment, I must say. - Sleep
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Post by jeremychristopher on Jul 4, 2006 1:38:51 GMT -5
I like it....and i like the fact that you rep'ed Christ in a poem.....some people think that their is no creativity in Christianity. Stay strong and stay BLESSED
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