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Post by kutipi2 }|{ on Feb 16, 2006 23:37:50 GMT -5
Breathing in the Spring
I inhaled your joy first daffodil in spring I exhaled anguish of a cold gray world No tears haunt my soul when the frigid snow becomes an orchid enchanting with pure glory of its freedom I danced to the sunlight to the embrace the new season of dreams that soon come to exist breathe it in
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Post by waterlily07 on Feb 17, 2006 9:54:04 GMT -5
I wish it was spring...lol...I'm tired of wearing my winter coat. Wonderful imagery, kutipi2.
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Post by kutipi2 }|{ on Feb 17, 2006 14:50:23 GMT -5
thanks waterlily07. this is my first time doing "Drop Poetry". I must say that it was very interesting. I makes you use your words carefully. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the response.
kutipi2
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:29:41 GMT -5
gorgeous imagery
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 12, 2008 16:45:12 GMT -5
Kuti, I can't believe I missed this. It is one of the best Drops I have read. The imagery and the flow are perfect. LB
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Post by kutipi2 }|{ on Mar 13, 2008 9:15:35 GMT -5
Moirae, thanks you for your reply. LB, you make me blush. I really appreciate your comment. And I just realized that I haven't been to this post in so long! Wow... Again, thank you both very much for your comments. I completely forgot about this one.
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cecelia
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Post by cecelia on Mar 14, 2009 18:50:32 GMT -5
Just looked out my kitchen window this week to the first daffodil. Your imagery brings the joy and celebration into focus, and tells us Mother Nature is tired of wearing her winter coat too. Thanks You get my Golden Daffodil award for this one.
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Post by kutipi2 }|{ on Mar 14, 2009 21:04:37 GMT -5
Wow...another old one. Hah. Thanks for reading a replying. And for the golden daffodil too! Much appreciated.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Mar 22, 2009 2:56:26 GMT -5
kuti... very nice... "I inhaled your joy/first daffodil in spring" how lovely this is! breath idea really works well here. celebratory but experienced, your narrator. best, molly
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Angel
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John 3:16
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Post by Angel on Jun 29, 2009 10:49:22 GMT -5
I felt it was very good, and i liked it alot. I thought the image you gave was also very good.
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chizl
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Post by chizl on Jul 3, 2009 18:40:14 GMT -5
Beautiful =)
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