JeRome
Established Muse
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Mar 29, 2006 1:40:31 GMT -5
Post by JeRome on Mar 29, 2006 1:40:31 GMT -5
Your fully naked softness beneath my embrace. Where I found with in that moment, the secret buried beneath the blossom of your orchid. The delicious taste of desire, that became when you came to be the sound of passion in our silence. The sunlight that fell over my world. My beginning that never ends. The more, when I had nothing more to give. The dreams that I dared to dream. The freedom with in my art, you are the poetry within my heart.
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Mar 30, 2006 22:47:02 GMT -5
Post by delunalore on Mar 30, 2006 22:47:02 GMT -5
I really like this poem I think it reads great and I like how you ended it with the rhyme .
Del
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Jul 9, 2006 12:18:59 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:18:59 GMT -5
lovely and sentimental
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Jul 21, 2006 2:17:00 GMT -5
Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 21, 2006 2:17:00 GMT -5
JeRome, Sensual, and very well written. The imagery was fantastic, and the last two lines were amazing. Great work.
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