Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
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Post by Hades on Nov 1, 2006 18:39:56 GMT -5
Laughing ghosts haunt marbled graves Diamond snow melt into stinging tears Naked ashes cuddle beneath the earth Hollow sounds of glorious deaths echo in fearful souls Secrets spilled in exhaled breaths linger over silent stones Embraced by poets desiring truths Written for you that dared to search
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Post by Elf(...drowning in tears...) on Nov 3, 2006 5:27:54 GMT -5
Very interesting composition of words,I liked it
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 4, 2006 22:37:52 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this
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Post by waterlily07 on Nov 17, 2006 16:56:34 GMT -5
"Secrets spilled in exhaled breaths"
I just fell in love with that line. The entire piece literally gave me the chills. Secrets never fade, as you pointed out. You have a way with words. Nicely done, hadesrex.
~waterlily07~
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Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
Posts: 34
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Post by Hades on Nov 26, 2006 14:25:25 GMT -5
thanks guys.
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