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Post by pennies4purpose on Nov 15, 2006 17:03:05 GMT -5
breathe in the innocence of a stranger let a smile remember from silent ashes and hollow stones to relax in the comfort of night.
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Post by waterlily07 on Nov 17, 2006 16:41:20 GMT -5
It's sweet and romantic in my pov.
The last two lines were penned beautifully. I just had an image of a couple sitting close to the dying fire. Great job on this DOP, pennies4purpose. Welcome to TPS!
~waterlily07~
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Post by Tamale Girl on Nov 21, 2006 12:10:49 GMT -5
i wonder why no one else has posted anything for this poem. it is short, yet beautifully done. good job. -divincomic
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 22, 2006 22:09:23 GMT -5
^^i really liked that line...good use of Drops of Poetry
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