Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
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Poetry
Nov 26, 2006 14:31:44 GMT -5
Post by Hades on Nov 26, 2006 14:31:44 GMT -5
Vanilla flame melt icy passions Dove's wing break powerful seas Moon angel remember perfect worlds Poet's child voice beautiful pictures
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Poetry
Nov 27, 2006 17:45:59 GMT -5
Post by bluefootgroup on Nov 27, 2006 17:45:59 GMT -5
You show you've got a brilliant touch for just making words work together to create multilayered and intense sensory images. The first three lines seem to me a demonstration or celebration of some sort of the kinds of images poetry can paint, with the last line nicely wrapping it up and sending the message home.
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Poetry
Nov 28, 2006 18:21:45 GMT -5
Post by waterlily07 on Nov 28, 2006 18:21:45 GMT -5
You captured the randomness in writing. A much enjoyed piece, hadesrex. ~waterlily07~
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Poetry
Dec 7, 2006 0:01:39 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Dec 7, 2006 0:01:39 GMT -5
i really liked this one...it seemed to flow
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Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
Posts: 34
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Poetry
Dec 7, 2006 19:53:21 GMT -5
Post by Hades on Dec 7, 2006 19:53:21 GMT -5
Thanks, that's what I consider poetry to be.
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