usmousie
Established Muse
Mousie Love
Posts: 212
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Post by usmousie on Dec 17, 2006 21:37:02 GMT -5
I remember the nutmeg angel innocence lingering like vanilla sweet mesmerized blossom on wings of dove Farewell carefree flowers
Sometimes in a hypnotic trance I breathe the perfect image of harvest moon in candle flame. She was my beautiful world.
Note: I didn't know you could repeat or change words, so these are the bare, pasted-together words that my mouse retrieved for me from the list!
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Post by delunalore on Dec 19, 2006 9:55:39 GMT -5
usmousie,
no need for worry... you did a great job with the words... I think it's a good poem...You can always modify the post if there's anything that you want to revise .
Later Deluna
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Post by waterlily07 on Dec 29, 2006 18:58:38 GMT -5
It's perfectly fine, usmousie. You did a great job. I like the second stanza. Kudos. ~waterlily07~
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Post by - Moirae - on Jan 12, 2007 12:55:42 GMT -5
great work
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 21, 2007 16:19:50 GMT -5
usmousie, This is a fantastic Drops piece. Beautiful string of words. Lady B
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usmousie
Established Muse
Mousie Love
Posts: 212
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Post by usmousie on Jan 21, 2007 22:31:17 GMT -5
When a poem is a loosely interconnected weave of words that aren't 100% logical and grammatical I like to call it a word necklace. This one has too much sense to be a real word necklace, really...... maybe I should always give myself this limitation, the 'strict' version of the Drops rules. Perhaps it ought to be a category. I find it much more fun this way. So the real rules would simply be every word in the poem has to stem from the drops words? Like if there was no 'the' you couldn't use it? Thank you for those who have praised it. May you never forget the Nutmeg Angel.
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Post by mywar on Feb 1, 2007 14:23:16 GMT -5
Nice dreamy warm feel..
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