Sufferwell
Established Muse
Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication. ~Leonardo da Vinci
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Post by Sufferwell on Mar 6, 2007 5:56:01 GMT -5
I sometimes listen to the snow a silent gift of comfort outside my discontent
listening to a hypnotic harvest of ice mesmerizes the hollow companion of my meloncholy as I cry to innocence.
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Post by merryl on Mar 8, 2007 6:48:44 GMT -5
You've done an excellent job here, sufferwell. Melancholy and very haunting...I love it!
mara
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Post by lifeart on Mar 8, 2007 18:32:20 GMT -5
beautiful job!
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Post by - Moirae - on Mar 9, 2007 4:58:36 GMT -5
a very sweet little poem
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Post by mywar on Mar 11, 2007 4:08:56 GMT -5
I echo the above comments, very picturesque.
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Sufferwell
Established Muse
Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication. ~Leonardo da Vinci
Posts: 268
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Post by Sufferwell on Mar 12, 2007 23:24:40 GMT -5
Thank you everyone. This was actually a very neat exercise! I really liked it.
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mathtears
Established Muse
Not a storybook princess.
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Post by mathtears on Apr 20, 2007 4:40:52 GMT -5
very nice write ! love it ! x
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arty
Wandering Muse
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Post by arty on Jun 20, 2007 7:15:20 GMT -5
very true.. perfect words.. thanks
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