bitter0irony
Established Muse
From even the greatest of horrors, Irony is seldom absent. ~H.P. Lovecraft, "The Shunned House"
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Post by bitter0irony on Feb 25, 2007 12:42:00 GMT -5
Protect old-fashioned innocence from the question of the moment-- she is listening through the rain, mesmerized, a brief white lily to burn to ashes
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Post by waterlily07 on Feb 25, 2007 15:28:16 GMT -5
Time can't stop, and pushes people to new heights. The imagery in the last line is powerful and strong. Well done, bitter0irony, and welcome to TPS!
waterlily07
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Post by mywar on Feb 27, 2007 18:38:53 GMT -5
Love the imagery.
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Post by - Moirae - on Mar 9, 2007 4:56:24 GMT -5
beautiful job with this..the last line really hits the reader
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dschieber
Established Muse
tortured for eternity
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Post by dschieber on Mar 22, 2007 15:56:36 GMT -5
good imagery and the title is perfect
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Post by janet on Mar 22, 2007 21:21:20 GMT -5
I like! janet
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Post by Perfect Mess on Mar 22, 2007 22:11:58 GMT -5
:)Wow. This was well written. The whole thing is perfect and puts out a strong message. I liked it a lot.
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