dschieber
Established Muse
tortured for eternity
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Post by dschieber on Mar 23, 2007 17:14:00 GMT -5
your the one i wanted your the one i needed your the one i left behind
i left you for a reason i left you for treason but somehow you changed my mind
this is actually part of a song i wrote but like these lines more than the song
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Post by deepwiccan on Mar 23, 2007 22:13:49 GMT -5
It must be a very good song if these are some of the words.
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Post by waterlily07 on Mar 24, 2007 23:33:59 GMT -5
I would love to read the rest of the song, dschieber. Thanks for sharing this with us! The last line just teased at my heart. Well done. waterlily07
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 25, 2007 12:19:39 GMT -5
ds, I would also like to read the song. These lines are super. Lady B
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Post by mywar on Mar 26, 2007 6:05:09 GMT -5
very angry & brutal.
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mathtears
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Not a storybook princess.
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Post by mathtears on Apr 6, 2007 7:46:16 GMT -5
nice work. very creative words in there. x
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