arty
Wandering Muse
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Oct 2, 2007 18:48:40 GMT -5
Post by arty on Oct 2, 2007 18:48:40 GMT -5
crazy stranger flirted ! I melted.. CARE-FREE how dare he d.. opss! sorry.. I ran into this spanish voice a guitar boy sweeet.. "Hola bonita" I sweated.. FROST how dare he s.. Awww!.. Mr.! Mr.! .. YOU MADE A STEP ON MY FOOT!! "sorry i'm a meditative," a-ha.. "Girl! the poetry in my mind is beeping" A?? *_*.. UH.. I returned..felt very summer!.. TERRIBLE how dare he?!! ... terrible terrible street ... terrible people.. .. ... .... TERRIBLE.. .. Rained!
Memo-Terrible Day Nov. 13 1945 ;D
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Oct 3, 2007 9:40:18 GMT -5
Post by Muni [Pondering] on Oct 3, 2007 9:40:18 GMT -5
HAHA!!!! I loved this piece. It made me laugh so much. I could feel your frustration though. HAHA!!!! Thanks for sharing.
Munim.
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Oct 3, 2007 13:43:22 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Oct 3, 2007 13:43:22 GMT -5
Hi arty, Welcome to TPS. It sure sounds like a terrible day. Very original! Lady B
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arty
Wandering Muse
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Oct 3, 2007 19:05:17 GMT -5
Post by arty on Oct 3, 2007 19:05:17 GMT -5
Hey Munim, haha frustration..well in real life i would feel so but here when i wrote this just felt fun.. so glad it made you laugh ;D and thanks for replying.. Hi Lady B, thanks for welcoming..though i'm not so new but just don't post a lot.. it's not a real memo if it seemd so..and ya terrible day thanks for ur opinion..glad to see u here..
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Oct 4, 2007 19:51:04 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 4, 2007 19:51:04 GMT -5
i liked it, great write...
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Oct 9, 2007 18:43:29 GMT -5
Post by pafaniqz on Oct 9, 2007 18:43:29 GMT -5
Your piece really stands out. The style is different from other people's, and it really works well for Drops.
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arty
Wandering Muse
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Oct 13, 2007 7:27:10 GMT -5
Post by arty on Oct 13, 2007 7:27:10 GMT -5
thanks Astarael, really glad you liked it..
hey Pafaniqz, that's huge!..thanks a lot..
^_^
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