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Mr. 25
Oct 11, 2007 8:43:16 GMT -5
Post by White Shadows on Oct 11, 2007 8:43:16 GMT -5
Mr. 25 <By Paul Marshall>
Mr. 25 driving outside in the pouring rain Driving crazy to the hotel Naked stranger of the night, care-free To room 25
Mr. 25 dares to be different Stubborn "Get me a *beeping* guitar!" "To strum the night to a meditative state"
Mr. 25 the crazy stranger of the night His mind trickles nostalgia Terribly composed eyebrows Skin like frost Scent of dirt But Delicate guitar strums
Mr. 25.. Why 25? Silent, collecting himself "25 plagued my summer days spent as a changed boy" "25 and guitar is all I know"
Mr. 25 What changed you? "No school"
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Mr. 25
Oct 11, 2007 8:48:22 GMT -5
Post by laydikay on Oct 11, 2007 8:48:22 GMT -5
Aww poor mr 25. good read. It gives the essence of a fast talking poem, i felt the need to read it fast as if all this was just one moment in his life like many others. It feels as though when he's playing his guitar the world almost stops for him but for us it speeds up. Hope that makes sense...lol xx
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Mr. 25
Oct 13, 2007 9:45:06 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Oct 13, 2007 9:45:06 GMT -5
Paul, Mr 25 is a wonderful, fast paced poem. The flow is marvelous. You make it look easy to do a Drop write. Kudos. Lady B
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Mr. 25
Oct 13, 2007 11:39:32 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Oct 13, 2007 11:39:32 GMT -5
quick witty and well written..what more could a reader want? loved the narrative story-like quality to this..
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Mr. 25
Oct 13, 2007 14:21:15 GMT -5
Post by midnite on Oct 13, 2007 14:21:15 GMT -5
i am impressed...loved this!!
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Mr. 25
Oct 21, 2007 17:00:32 GMT -5
Post by White Shadows on Oct 21, 2007 17:00:32 GMT -5
Thanks for all your comments guys much appreciated...this was damn hard to write!
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Mr. 25
Oct 27, 2007 10:03:16 GMT -5
Post by Controlled Robotica on Oct 27, 2007 10:03:16 GMT -5
Wow Paul! This is like so immense =D That must have taken so long! Worth it though [= I love your poetry.
Charlotte__x
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Mr. 25
Dec 5, 2007 16:12:08 GMT -5
Post by twilightmidnight on Dec 5, 2007 16:12:08 GMT -5
this was such a clever piece...I have yet to grasp the concept of the Drops I shall look out for more of your work your a talented writer and it really shows! x Sarah x
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