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Post by Controlled Robotica on Oct 27, 2007 10:00:40 GMT -5
Motions entranced Ladies disregarded Unseen stranger Digital summer.
Skinny child Charming thirteen Stood behind the tree Shimmering dazzling and perfect.
Cupped hands convene Sally watch the gondolas Carriages of crystal Riding quickly Streaming balance.
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Post by White Shadows on Oct 27, 2007 10:03:31 GMT -5
A really clever piece using the drops kit I loved the first and last stanza's, very creative indeed! You really showed you work well with limitations. Well done!
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 28, 2007 15:00:29 GMT -5
IHOPEYOUCHOKE, This is an impressive drops. I love the imagery. Kudos! Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 28, 2007 18:00:57 GMT -5
i agree with lady B the imagery in this was really awesome. great dop.
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namaea
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Namaea
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Post by namaea on Oct 30, 2007 17:53:41 GMT -5
Wonderful! There is a simplicity and beauty to using mainly two-word lines- one word describes the other and the impact is more forceful, stark, and beautiful. Great job
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