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Post by violist on Oct 27, 2007 19:54:52 GMT -5
Shifting foliage; Lush trees shimmer in lovely Balance; entrancing.
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Post by bradmckenzie(The Comeback Kid) on Oct 27, 2007 20:24:27 GMT -5
haha, nailed the haiku form perfectly this time
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 28, 2007 15:02:12 GMT -5
Violist, I believe you have a talent for this. Lovely piece. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 28, 2007 18:03:09 GMT -5
awesome little piece. much enjoyed it.
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namaea
Wandering Muse
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Post by namaea on Oct 30, 2007 18:08:12 GMT -5
Here, I will expose my ignorance at a haiku, I really don't know what that is, but apparently you nailed it, lol. I am supposing it has something to do with rythym and syllables? Anyhow, as being ignorant is not the worst sin in the world, I am not ashamed to admit it. I definitely enjoyed the simplicity of the piece. Great work
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